Love

A poem I wrote when My mom toook Bobby away(read Bobby's story)

Love

 

You held me when i was sad you calmed me when i was mad your gone I feel so very bad I love you I love you so much and know that your gone I want you back I love you.

 

By Absule

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I'm not sure if you have thought about it before, but you may want to consider using white-space to enhance your meaning for this poem.

Example:

You held me when i was sad
you calmed me when i was mad
you're gone
I feel so very bad
I love you
I love you so much
and know that your gone
I want you back
I love you.