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a poem I wrote cuz I got bored. I wrote it a while back, but didn't get around to uploading it.

 

Random               3/14/14

 

What to do when your world seems like its falling apart, put all your hopes and dreams into crappy works of “art”.

 

Sit and cry all alone till your driven to self-harm. Put a pistol to your head Bite the dust and buy the farm.

 

What to do when the man you love leaves you sad and hurt, leaves you feeling cold and hallow like a piece of dirt.

 

Think about how you could have changed things and made them the way they were, try to do what you can so romantic feelings stir.

 

What to do when you love him so much that it stings, and you sit and listen to johnny cash as about love he sings.

 

you don’t know if he loves you, if he really cares, but it cuts you deep when you notice all his painful stares.

 

You want to do all these things but you have to hide your love, cuz his mom doesn’t know, though it was sent from above.

Reviews

[Bowers]

you wrote this because you were bored... wow... this was really good, I do, in fact love the message..! I love what you've written! great write!

[ur_ginger_girl]

thank you. most of the stuff I write when I'm bored turns out being my best, and the stuff I put effort into ends up being crappy and out of rhythm.

[Alex Ryder]

I mean this in the least offensive way possible, but are you a good speller? If so, your poem could benefit a lot from writing your words out- i.e, "you" instead of "u." The content is fine, though.

[ur_ginger_girl]

I wrote this on my phone. when I type on my phone, I automatically use "u" and "ur" instead of writing it out. I was in a rush when I typed it on the computer, so I didn't edit them out.

[Alex Ryder]

You can revise your poems once they're published, you know.