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a poem I wrote about my boyfriend, I don't know when or why. I just found it on my phone

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Sitting in a room. Wanting the day to end. Sad, and lonely wanting the love of a friend.

 

Wanting to lay close by your side, to be your lover your life, and your bride.

 

To kiss, and to touch you and to cuddle you up tight. I wish you didn’t care if our love was wrong or right.

 

To look so deep in to your eyes and hear you say you love me. I wish that I didn’t love you, I wish I could be free.

Reviews

[stars are far]

i wish.. I WILL ALWAYS WISH..
that is amazing..i can so relate to this... well done

[ur_ginger_girl]

thank you. I didn't put much effort into this, my boyfriend left after lunch and I was already questioning us so I got really hurt and wrote this. its usually my works that I don't put effort into that get reviews, lol.

[stars are far]

yeah..usually because they come from heart..and because you dont think about them..they just flow...:)

[ur_ginger_girl]

yeah, with a lot of mine, the first couple stanzas will come at random and flow. I will write them down and add to them later.

[stars are far]

yeah this is what i do sometimes..i write down..then months later..i read them and i can also continue the idea..easily :)

[Demii]

aweh this is so sad, and leaves me with a sense of regret, and sympathy.

[ur_ginger_girl]

then I got my feelings across cuz I felt sadness and regret when I wrote it. ty for the review.