Forgiveness

written 2000

Forgiveness is like honey,

It’s sweet when its here,

But there’s times its lost to us,

And we wonder with our fear.

To forgive is a wonder,

In a world like we’ve got,

It can be a mystery,

The way we get things taught.

To forgive someone is Godly,

But to love them is even more,

As God is love it self,

Or else we’re out the door.

So to you I give my all,

As I love you with my heart,

And if you can forgive me,

Our friendship will never part.

Knowman

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Forgiveness allow us to move on. Living is anger and disappointment allow us to become blind to the good in the world. I like the way you described the journey to peace and happiness.
"As I love you with my heart,
And if you can forgive me,"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

This poem made me smile. Awesome job

[SUGATA M]

Fine

[Layla J Omorose]

This was a very meaningful poem about love and forgiveness and how one is connected to the other.

[The White Wolf]

Forgiveness is a very great gift, not just for the one who is the recipient, but for self. But to mean it, when we forgive, not just to say the words, is a blessing. A very inspirational write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A prayer that lays on the mind, well done, good read.

[rivers]

A most excellent message to your well written wisdom...the last 4 lines surrender it all for me...

"So to you I give my all,
As I love you with my heart,
And if you can forgive me,
Our friendship will never part."

[R J Askew]

amen to that one.

[light and ashes]

I had an idea to write about forgiveness. As I very recently reached complete and total forgiveness from all who have hurt me. I wasn't able to find the words for it. This poem is superb.

[olla]

very nice..