Forgiveness

written 2000

Forgiveness is like honey,

It’s sweet when its here,

But there’s times its lost to us,

And we wonder with our fear.

To forgive is a wonder,

In a world like we’ve got,

It can be a mystery,

The way we get things taught.

To forgive someone is Godly,

But to love them is even more,

As God is love it self,

Or else we’re out the door.

So to you I give my all,

As I love you with my heart,

And if you can forgive me,

Our friendship will never part.

Knowman

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Forgiveness allow us to move on. Living is anger and disappointment allow us to become blind to the good in the world. I like the way you described the journey to peace and happiness.
"As I love you with my heart,
And if you can forgive me,"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Draven]

forgiveness is something that poeple these days lack. They allow their hurt and anger to take over them and many become slaves under its power. If the world could learn to forgive, we wouldnt have the kind of world we have today. I am a forgiving person, but I do not forget what has been done to me.

The message was great, and it was expressed skillfully. Good work.

[BreeBree1983]

I have such a hard time with forgivness.. very good writing.

[Jazique]

Nice, very nice. The beauty yet complicity of Forgiveness and its connection to love. I enjoy this and its phylosophy of forgivenesss that is so hard to give and yet taken for granted sometimes.

[TL Boehm]

Forgiveness is a choice - well penned piece here.

[Octob3r Star]

A very sweet writing. Thanks for sharing. Cheers!

[devon]

I really liked this poem. You've written is beautifully and have shared your thoughts on forgiveness very well. :)

My favorite part was:
"So to you I give my all,
As I love you with my heart,"

Kudos, dove.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice. I enjoyed the first line of this poem as well as the meaning, and this part here:
"As I love you with my heart,
And if you can forgive me,
Our friendship will never part."

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I think you done an excellent job with this. It's true that forgiveness isn't seen too much in this world. Forgiving someone is something I've always been taught. Because in His word it reads: "To be forgiven, you need to forgive".
Great job once again!! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Rene Velez]

Good wording and cadence, meaningful and pleasant, well done

[Victoria Elizabeth]

i love it very good