What Christ Might of Said

What Christ Might of Said

A Poem by knowman
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Imagine

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If Christ had written a poem to us,

What do you think it would of said?

Might He say? “What’s in your way?”

And to clear it from our head.

All those things offered new each day,

Will hide My love from you!

And you’ll really like it there,

Because of all you get to do.

But to get you back from that world,

Is what the Path is for,

Those stumbling blocks, before us, have been hurled,

It’s just to teach us more!

To be free, and to know it’s real,

Is the best you’ll ever be!

And in following these few clues,

You’ll be following Me……..!

Knowman

© 2011 knowman


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Once again, short but meaningful which is good for this type of write in my view. It's opinion based but it's not preaching, which I believe is where some folk go wrong with spiritual writing.
Good job mate.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful piece and something I myself have thought about, you have penned your thoughts beautifully!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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knowman
knowman

Spokane, WA



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