Reaching Within

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There’s a sacred, hidden valley,

So deep within one’s mind,

And its there that we should tarry,

And, its there that we will find.

Every important element needed,

To create every existing thing,

And every answer wanted,

And every song we sing.

Deep within this valley,

Enlightenment does retain,

And while in this place of spirit,

Which is deep within our brain.

We can reach the world,

And tell the things we see,

We can bring this Spirit World.

Out here, to you and to me.

Knowman

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Reviews

[Miss Fox]

Rhyming is something I cannot do, and I admire those who can. It's a deep and hopeful poem, and a delight to read.

[Tina Kline]

Another very well written poem with outstanding rhythm and rhyming. I really like the message in this one too. Its very uplifting and I think so true. You're very talented.