What I'm worth

What I'm worth

A Poem by absolutefolie

“No guy is worth your tears,

And the one who is,

Won’t make you cry”

 

Okay, so first

That’s not true.

 

You’re worth every single tear that I cry.

 

Every laugh

Every breath

Every smile

 

You’re worth it all

 

Then that makes me wonder,

If you think I’m worth anything.

 

I’d ask you, but

I don’t think you’d listen.

 

*silence*

 

And that’s what I’m worth.

© 2011 absolutefolie


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Being "noticed"... something so many always dream about. Do we really want to ever just be "Fans"?

You asked a tough question.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really like thiss, i like the fact you used a quote, it's a good way to start a poem off! (i may steal that leaf out of your book there ;D) if i could suggest one thingg, i wouldn't put *silence* you could just leave a fair few lines in between the 2 sentences and the effect should come across :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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