Free

Finally,

I can breathe.

 

My mind is free,

I’m free.

 

Free to do whatever

Take me wherever

Do it whenever

 

Those tears?

Yeah, they’re gone;

It seemed worse at the time

But it’s over

And I can breathe again,

 

For now.

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Freedom to be is just perfect.. I love this...x

[Sherwette]

I love it. Freedom is the most liberating feeling.

[EMP]

oh my. this is BRILLIANT. i don't know what it is about it... it's almost blunt and to the point but there's mystery as to what's going on behind it. and that last bit is like a punch in the face 'for now'. so good!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Right on! Coming to terms with ever it is in life is to be truly free. You’ve done a Great job in bringing this piece together. Keep on writing.

[Calypso]

So liberating. I have come to the point in my life where I have finally left go of the past and I'm ready to embrace the future. This poem describes how I feel perfectly.

[Forgotten]

I like it, its honest and it means something to you which is the most important thing. Well done