I cried

My first poem with rhyme, I thought of it while trying to get to sleep and wrote it down :)

You left,

Me there,

Alone,

I cried.

 

The things,

I felt,

Inside,

Have died.

 

I think,

Of all,

The times,

We had.

 

But hey,

It does,

Not make,

Me sad.

 

The tears,

Have gone,

I will,

Come through.

 

For I,

Can do,

Much better,

Than you.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think about the rhyming, as I've never done it before :)

Reviews

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Ha ha :) I so love this, Great job, you have an excellent grammar style, and you know exactly which words to full-fill each of out hearts that have been broken.

~S. D. Blankenship

[Calypso]

You sound so strong. Your heart may become broken but it will heal in time.

[Hush Hush]

I really like this poem, it's really cute yet strong in it's content and the emotions flowing through it :D