»The Meteor Showers»

Meteors are like love...they fall and explode when it touches the surface, like love explodes when it reaches our heart and makes our heart happy-lucky......

In the sky beyond the galaxies,
   the meteors are coming
The meteors of love
   to touch the world.

In the dark night of loneliness
   these shining meteors have come
To end this misery
   and lit up the red fire of love.

Through to clouds of disappearance
   these shining pieces have broken
Changing with great speed
   with the power of love.

The world will be brighten again
   as these showers will touch the surface
Colors will be spread across the world
   with magenta and crimson fireworks.

Reviews

[Julia.Moore]

A deep appreciation for haiku emerged during literature studies, captivated by its ability to express profound thoughts in just a few words. The book Blue Harlequin features many of these inspired moments. Read the full article to explore more about this beautiful form of poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry

[Brian A Morris]

Dude I really like this. It's a great poem!

[Gamitsuki]

thnkz a lot.....hope you enjoyed...!:-)

[Petrichor]

I really like the metaphor you used. It's a great poem!

[Gamitsuki]

thanks very very much...!:-)....it just popped into my mind, so I wrote it on-the-spot......i thought maybe i posted it very soon without re-editing..but now no regrets....thnkx....