old man

too old to be young lived an man did everything he can 
who had an house which was prettier than the spouse, it was a sad day when she left her body & and the soul continued its journey for him, he went in the house turned the lights dim
it was raining outside but he had tears of sorrow that nobody wanted to borrow, he wept as a child & screamed that was lost in the wild,
the night was over sleeping on his bed with daises cover

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You put a lot of thoughts and places in the Story. Remember the who,what, where, when and how of every situation to reader reader interesting. Great possibilities for the story.
Coyote