Awake

never stay awake...

Awake...

Wwide Eeyed opened

Looking at the Ceilings crumpled...

Alone, lonely yet far from it.

The image passed

Jumped down on you;

You scream...no response 

You're are the only person remaining in the world. 

Author's Note

Scary?..

Reviews

[unsavable_soul]

You do use some very interesting imagery and I really like that about this work.
"Jumped down on you;
You scream...no response "
I really found these two lines, unique and pulling. It is haunting by the end.
I will say you left me wanting more though, I really think this is a piece you might consider adding to if you are inclined, I know I would love to read more of it.
Sincerely
Chris

[dicey jones]

I think i might just do that if my imagination goes darker... thanks again for your reviews.
dicey.

[unsavable_soul]

Not a problem, I enjoy giving them as long as I most often don't over step myself.
Chris

[Prritiy]

not exactly scary... but frightening with fact that loneliness itself frightens.

nice write, liked it.

[Pax]

intense! ~ you captured the feeling of being alone in the big bad world... the feeling of being helpless without anyone to hold into...
great job!