Sudden Trip...

Sudden Trip...

A Poem by abhas

Rusty old afternoon,

Sun seemed to sigh,

At the beggars who were busy singing,

For lion heads, just another try,

 

Somewhere in between,

dark clouds took the stage,

scenes like pre �"apocalypse,

lisping lullabies giving way to a darker night,

 

the mind wonders, the rapturous thunder

and temperature reversals gives wings,

the elevation out of reality into the divine,

wish I could trap and mummify in my mind,

 

but this elation,

a sudden trip at best,

born out of ancestral tendencies,

or just dismissed as a hormonal thing,

 

Or,

May be sometimes,

We should feel to see,

That nature manifests and celebrates itself,

Through you and me...

© 2011 abhas


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The poem is amazing. I enjoyed reading the poem and the flow of the words. The poem made me feel more content and happy. A outstanding poem. The ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing this positive poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are exceptional here... Captured the subtle changes in life very acutely... Well done my friend!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad and introspective gem...A telling commentary on the ephemerality of life and its little joys...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write, i like that ending and the depth. pretty cool.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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