Wondering

And it's about...wondering!

Different scenarios go through my mind

Feeling as if im blind

Not a soul  reaching out

Only emptyness hearing me shout

 

As I wander around the room

Wondering about my doom

What will come of me

Where lies the soul with the key?

 

 

Reviews

[sammyj]

i like this piece, keep up the good work

[Rosalyn Marie]

really nice. the rhyme is great and it flows really nicely. it's almost a sad poem, like about someone who is trapped inside themself wondering how to get out.... really good job :D

[Jong Schrijver]

Good poem. The rhyme scheme is good and I like this perspective on wondering. Good job!