The Truth

I'm a liar

I'm useless

I'm dumb

I give up easily

I'm gonna get knocked up at a tender age

I'm gonna do drugs the minute I meet "a guy"

That's what you say

You must be mistaken

I state facts

I do what needs to be done

I'm smart in the ways that matter

I never give up on something with hope

I'll be a mommy when I  please

When I meet a guy, the only drug he'll give me is love

This is what I know

Thanks for your opinion, though.

 

 

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Oooh, nicely done! Writing seems to be a good outlet for many people, and it may be one of yours? I'm not sure but this was deep and I enjoyed reading it. :)
It's sad to think how those first few lines are what everyone hears and they don't wish them to be true but sometimes it gets to them and comes true anyhow.

[Rosalyn Marie]

wow this is really deep and a very good poem. its good you can go on WC and write these poems because (unless the inspiration for these isn't from personal experience) it seems to be a good outlet for emotions

[Kirbetsy]

This is probably your best one...yet. What happened this time?