The Sky Is The Limit

Did this during tears, Therefore didnt check grammar or spelling. Realize how i tend to start off in a poetical matter, and change Mixed emotions,

Where are you placed?
What have you faced?
hows senior year?
do you shed atleast one tear?
where do you sleep?
With whom?
Hows the wheather down south?
Hows your mom?
Does she mention me?
Hows your brother?
Does he still look just like you?
So relevent?
So innocent?
Your probobly so sick of all these stupid unsent miss you letters.
concidering you havent even recieved any
I cried so many tears;
Possibly more tears than kisses you have given me
I'm crying for a guy,
I'll never meet again,
A cowboy,
Thats in it, to win it,
To win the prize; Me- My body.
I was just your hookup buddy,
My mates knew,
You knew, I knew,
Yet you denied it
You denied everything; Even us,
Someone so cruel,
Yet stunning.
You sang a song to me during hour one,
As I listen to the lyrics now,
"Like a shot, to my heart;
 when I saw you tonight,
 Like a dream, come to life,
 for the very first time"
You used me,
You changed me,
I hate the new me,
Change me back,
Please.
Leave her,
Take me,
Like you told me

" The Sky Is The Limit"

Author's Note

Did this during tears, Therefore didnt check grammar or spelling.
Realize how i tend to start off in a poetical matter, and change
Mixed emotions,

Reviews

[Liza]

so sad
well expressed

[Catonia06]

Brilliant

[PaperHearts]

Nice write! It's definitely convoluted, and hard to follow at times, but in my opinion, I think that just reflects the emotional state that you were in when you wrote this. I think it adds to the effect of the tone of the piece, and makes it a really believable read. There were several moments that I thought were absolutely amazing, particularly at the start of the piece. Overall, a good effort. :)
~PaperHearts

[Maurice]

It is a very moving write.

[Norma M Sutton]

It reads like a diary entry. The mix works.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

man, poor girl,
it's hard to keep on living after the abusive experience...you have a very strong voice in this poem...keep it up..