BunnyRabbit

Small and white

Cuddly and fuzzy

Quiet but feirce

It hops home

Where only love with be heard.

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Aww, a very cute read! This was a simple write, and didn't really explore anything too deeply until perhaps the last line. In a way, I liked the simplicity, because for me, it reflected the innocence of the rabbit, but at the same time, I kind of wanted you to expand on your ideas a little bit more. I do agree with RonnieBreight in saying that the last line seemed a little bit convoluted, and I also noticed that you had spelt 'fierce' incorrectly, but other than that, this was a lovely poem. :)
~PaperHearts

[Maurice]

Short but very accurate in its description.

[KatiePie]

This was adorable. It's short, simple, to the point, but that might be what makes me love it so much. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine

[Charles]

Quiet but feirce...I hope someone's keeping that bunny happy, lol. Niceread.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

awwwwwwwwwwwww...
so cute...

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and effective

[RonnieBreight]

I don't really understand this. Like it seems like it doesn't really have a story line or a point really. And the word choice is pretty basic and not very descriptive. I also don't understand the last line. Maybe instead of "with" you mean "will"? I'm not sure. But I do like the idea of a bunny rabbit. I just think you have a lot more potential than you're using here.

[My Fair Lady]

After reading this I am left with the feeling that I want to know more of what has inspired this piece. I agree bunnies are quiet but can also be fierce.. so i wonder...