Ten

Ten Fingers Entwined,

Nine Minutes of Love

Eight Breathes

Seven Tears of Joy

Six Roses

Five Winks

Four Eyes

Three Seconds

Two People

One Meaning

I Love You

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Interesting

[PaperHearts]

Wow! I really liked this! You were able to capture so many emotions using very few words. I liked the concept behind this, and thought that you executed it brilliantly. I was really able to relate to this poem, and reading through it definitely made me smile. The only thing that I noticed was that 'breathes' should be 'breaths' in the third line. :P Great work,
~PaperHearts

[Needy]

Love it

[Maurice]

Very ingeniously written.

[StacyPerry]

A very nice write and I thank you for this one. Tough times can be overcome with a simple statement of love...

[Brianna Brie]

Creative write!

[Norma M Sutton]

I like how you've worked this out. So few words that covey so much emotion.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

o seconds...break up...

kidding....

this was rare..

[My Fair Lady]

Oh how the wedding planner in me is in love with this sweet and special poem!

[Moonflower]

This is lovely, dear. very nice work.