Guessing With The Wind

Written specially for the contest "One Letter Poem" I recieved the letter G; Guessing With The Wind

Its only the twenty-seventh of September,

It was only last month; Remember?

When you took my hand,

Your toes, and mine; lost in the sand

Mid-Summer

Our laughs,

Your magic touch,

Made me go crazy;much?

You said good-bye,

You saw me cry,

It wasn't your fault, you had to go,

Texas Canvas was calling you,

I remember your face as the taxi pulled up

Your warm hug,

Which felt so right

I got a call that night,

It was your sweet voice as you whispered "goodnight"

Havent heard from you since than,

Do you still love me?

Do you still need me?

Do you still hear me?

Do you still feel me?

So many unanswered questions,

Just Guessing With The Wind.

Reviews

[Needy]

Great joib. Liked it

[Brianna Brie]

Your toes, and mine; lost in the sand
Mid-Summer

I like your title and how you tied it together with the end. Good work!

[JRB]

Keep up the great work nice write

[Jonathan De Elvira]

So touching...
So sad...
Hope that the guy still does remember the girl...

[Adelia Alighieri]

Fluent, absolutely fluent. Great job!

[Maurice]

I agree that it reads like a song.

[My Fair Lady]

wow... that was pretty cool.

[Norma M Sutton]

This reads like a song.

[KaySea]

nicely done

[Sports Girl]

Very pretty. I liked it a lot. Very well written