Bye? And thankyou

Your gone by tomorrow,

Without a moonlight ride,

Without a single beach tide,

No tears shedding from your bloody eyes,

No whispers of broken promises,

No reegrets,

No apologizes,

I can't hear you complain,

Because your not with me,

On your last night,

Your running, Fast

To catch your flight,

To Texas,

To your 50something other girlfriends,

When you have your last few hours here,

With me,

Your wasting it,

Watching that brainwashing porn videos home,

You dont care about my feelings,

I wanna be with you,

No goodbye kiss,

Not even a plain out goodbye,

Your leaving me,

Without even a goodbye?

Is it because you dont love me anymore?

Or because it's too hard to say goodbye?

Guys;

This is'nt a poem, i dont know what this is its just my heart, Im drowning in tears. My summer fling is leaving. Without a goodbye. I feel like dying. =(

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It reminded me of a song the poem. The words flow and story. Those summer flings leave a lot of escape routes. A very sad story and ending to a summer. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[PaperHearts]

Aww, this was a really touching poem. The emotions in this piece felt so raw and so real, and as the reader, I felt like I could relate to the emotions and thoughts that you expressed on so many different levels. I thought that the first half was a lot better than the second half, and that the proofreading could have been better, but overall, this was another very solid write. :)
~PaperHearts

[Needy]

Like this because it has great words for describing what it feels like to go through the hurt.

[Maurice]

This poem moved me considerably. It expresses so well the pain of parting.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

sometimes it is really hard to say goodbye bcuz me as a man really afraid of loosing...but the way u describe this guy made me confused...
I mean, is he really emotionless or something????
hurm...

[My Fair Lady]

Goodbyes are hard for many of us. The last two lines are the power of this work. I like how you show that when it comes to saying goodbye it may be easier to side step the pain by a nonconstructive distraction, that means nothing and leaves everyone feeling empty. May I suggest some editing: Having your authors note at the end took away the power of the writing for me. I would try moving it to the authors note field. I am glad you have the author's note, however... it explains a lot. Also, it would make for a smoother read if you take a look at spelling. A good poem otherwise, and I like it .

[Norma M Sutton]

Doesn't really matter what it is written as as long as it gets part of those feelings out into the open.

[KaySea]

very good. i liked it alot