In The Morning

Companion piece to In the evening: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/abdulrocks/639179/

The windows in the morning

Are serenaded by the gold

The exultant sun creates

For humans to behold.

 

The children are up

Engaging in fantasies of old.

Reality's a broken toy

In their stories yet untold.

 

The city's still waking up,

The people are at ease;

The morning brings a joie de vivre

To every soul that sees.

 

In the arms of morning

I see your silhouette of peace;

Your gentle hair and pristine aura

Ruffling in the breeze.

 

As this brocade of leaves

Paints its shadows on your face,

Swaying in the wind

With such eternal grace,

 

As your blissful morning smile

All doubts and fears allays,

I think and sit nonplused

Enamoured by your ways.

Reviews

[Suditi]

A superb piece.
The imagery is so profound.
This poem is kind of serene. It flows so beautifully.
Loved it.

[Devons]

To me, there always seems a certain freshness to lyrical, rhyming poetry: to me, this is what poetry means. There is an almost palpable air of coolness whispering gently through the words of this piece, and with it a celebration of the passing beauty of life and the world.
The mystery of personification in the latter half is charming, and the overall feel is clean and angelic almost, leaving a positive and dream-like apparition of beauty.
A lovely poem.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

As this brocade of leaves

Paints its shadows on your face,

Swaying in the wind

With such eternal grace,..........simply beautiful!

[Michael X]

ode to the Angel of the morning, this is beautiful, the expression exudes
adoration, life, experience and those little things that bring the day to
life that are often overlooked, but the day is perspective to when
when one first wakes up. you have a talented way with words Abdul ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing poem. You took me to some good places and some good thoughts. I like a new morning. Opportunity for some fun and laughter. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote