Meeting For Dessert

Meeting For Dessert

A Poem by Abdul Aziz

With an empty glass and spotless dishes,

In a room with scent of unfulfilled wishes,

Memories of empty thoughts reside

Among the vacant chairs' mild skirmishes.

 

Where once this room was filled with laughter,

Smiles would fill the air thereafter,

Now the song of silence lives

In the debris of daily disasters.

 

We're lost in islands of grim isolation,

Now under the shade of new expectations;

When once we used to laugh with our hearts,

Now we droop with our minds' calculations.

 

But time can heal as well as hurt,

As memories sadden, but pain avert;

We've had our course in life together,

Perhaps we'll meet again for dessert.

© 2010 Abdul Aziz


Author's Note

Abdul Aziz
Image courtesy of :
http://www.dezeen.com/2009/07/10/past-memories-by-valentin-loellmann/

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I've always seen you grow as someone who mixes the classic style with shades of today. Somehow, I couldn't do that perfectly and that's why I like all your such poems. This is one of them. And of course, the different rhyme scheme, aaxa, kudos to that! I thought 'calculations' and 'avert' maybe replaced. Nothing more.

Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The poem is very good. The detail description and untold story make the poem become alive. I like the description of the room and the items in the room. The ending was excellent. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Abdul Aziz
Abdul Aziz

Chennai, Tamil Nadu, India



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Hello there. I'm a medical doctor by profession, in search of a better career. Right now, my only pastime seems to be navigating around the vicissitudes of life. I'm passionate about computers and p.. more..

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