Dancing with her

She's bathed by nectar from a bleeding rose,

She's draped by sunshine and morning yellow.

She tastes of honey and smells of musk,

And sounds like violin kissed by cello.

 

She looks like a million dreams of yore;

She walks like a song, pure and free.

Her laughter rings like a songbird's note;

And every word she speaks is poetry.

 

She smiles like the sky in its bluest hour,

Her face is chiseled by God's own hands.  

Her eyes radiate like the sleepy moon;

My heartbeat is in their command.

 

She wears my dreams effortlessly;

She slips into them every night,

To dance her way into my heart,

With uncut love and soothing delight.

 

I do not want to live forever

When I can sway here in her breeze;

And see her slip into my dreams;

And dance to love's serene decrees.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. this is a fiercely passionate piece that is mesmorizing and lyrical to the max! Loved the rhythm, rhyme and beat.. can well see this played in song! Also a very high tribute to someone of very high praise in your heart! Loved the entire piece the stanza:

She looks like a million dreams of yore;
She walks like a song, pure and free.
Her laughter rings like a songbird's note;
And every word she speaks is poetry.

this is a poem in itself.. lucky woman to have such admiration on so many levels! Beautiful and intoxicating.. fantastic work that goes to my favs!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

A lovely ode to your loved one...your words danced their way to my heart..i enjoyed reading it..

[Wicahpi]

Pretty words that most women would
adore if read out loud to them.
I like the second stanza and the fourth.
I've always liked comparisons to nature.
Nature is beautiful in so many ways which
can easily be reflected, protected in to and
from a woman. A nice expression of adoration.

[Ruth]

This is a beautiofully written poem, a poem that shows the innocence and divineness of love! The perfect person or wish for that person!
Awesome
xx

[StacyPerry]

I can't even choose 1 line that I thought stood out as they all did to me.

[Radha Jaisingh]

Amazing..........Every word, every sentence, every line presents itself like a dream......its fantabulous....ur a gifted writer:)

[Julijana Velichkovska]

And sounds like violin kissed by cello...
beautiful!

[floarealbastra10]

wow, quiet the beautiful poem

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful. You put the best words in the best order to bring out the best poem. One can never get tired of reading this over and over again. Great!

[Brianna Brie]

She smiles like the sky in its bluest hour,
Her face is chiseled by God's own hands.
Her eyes radiate like the sleepy moon;
My heartbeat is in their command.

I like the way you uniquely and effortlessly describe her. Pure poetry!

[faryn wolff]

This is a delightful read from the very first line. The imagery expressed sets the standards for the following lines and I’m pleased that the rest of the poem develops suitably. I must commend you on your word usage; every word fits beautifully. The overall tone is so pleasantly ardent...The emotion is surreally felt and lovingly expressed. The recipient of such adoration is remarkably lucky, indeed!