Dancing with her

She's bathed by nectar from a bleeding rose,

She's draped by sunshine and morning yellow.

She tastes of honey and smells of musk,

And sounds like violin kissed by cello.

 

She looks like a million dreams of yore;

She walks like a song, pure and free.

Her laughter rings like a songbird's note;

And every word she speaks is poetry.

 

She smiles like the sky in its bluest hour,

Her face is chiseled by God's own hands.  

Her eyes radiate like the sleepy moon;

My heartbeat is in their command.

 

She wears my dreams effortlessly;

She slips into them every night,

To dance her way into my heart,

With uncut love and soothing delight.

 

I do not want to live forever

When I can sway here in her breeze;

And see her slip into my dreams;

And dance to love's serene decrees.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. this is a fiercely passionate piece that is mesmorizing and lyrical to the max! Loved the rhythm, rhyme and beat.. can well see this played in song! Also a very high tribute to someone of very high praise in your heart! Loved the entire piece the stanza:

She looks like a million dreams of yore;
She walks like a song, pure and free.
Her laughter rings like a songbird's note;
And every word she speaks is poetry.

this is a poem in itself.. lucky woman to have such admiration on so many levels! Beautiful and intoxicating.. fantastic work that goes to my favs!

[Gracie-San]

I love the rhythm and rhyme. It flowed perfectly. Not to mention the imagery in this poem is absolutely great, and your word choice is beautiful. This woman is absolutely fortunate to be remembered in such a beautiful way!

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

This is really good, wish I could write something even half as good as this. I love the part "She walks like a song" it's just so unexpected but it works really good within the stanza. =)

[Adelia Alighieri]

Wow, you have magic in your words O_o Honestly, I wish I could write like you somedayyyy..
Kudos sir +)

[Cassiopia Summers]

I love the passion in the piece!! It's adorable hun. (: I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You wrote a beautiful poem of love and great hope. To wish for a woman and allow her to dance into your mind and heart allow the emotion to grow to great passion and a good place to be. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Removed Account]

This is, the way i wish i could write.

[Robyn]

wow this is an amazing poem! i really enjoyed reading it! and what an amazing girl to know! very nice work with this!

[Tate Morgan]

This phrase is divine inspiration
She wears my dreams effortlessly;

She slips into them every night,

To dance her way into my heart,

With uncut love and soothing delight.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

You are a poet's poet. Very few men allow themselves to float upon the waves of love's ocean. I like that you immerse yourself in its waters, unafraid and irreducible. Somehow, your words restore my faith that a man can love as deep as me.

Linda Marie Van Tassell