She Is Love

I know I've been driving everyone up the wall with this spate of love poems. Please bear with me :)

 

She Is Love

She's the song that plays when hope is sleeping;

She's the sound of life when love is dreaming.

She's the light of stars when the sun is leaving,

The work of God I would die believing.

 

She's a sign of life when death is dying,

She's a sigh of joy when life is crying

She's a breath of warmth when winter's seeping,

She's love, she's hope; she's health and healing

 

She's the sound of thunder when clouds are stealing,

She's the touch of rain when peace is fleeing;

She's the smell of victory when pain's receding

She's the antidote to my lonely being.

 

Reviews

[hanselwheresgretel?]

this is beautiful :) Your choice of words not only characterizes her, but also yourself as the author. This teasings, i think, draws audiences in even more. well done!

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you very much for your kind words!

[Saddam]

Yes dear she is everything for everything.
Every words are very sensual and touchable. It touch my deep heart.
LOVE THIS.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the description of the woman. A good woman can make us dream and be content. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Abdul Aziz]

Yes, women are the elixir of life. Thank you very much for your comments CP :)

[AYVID N]

You have written with such flair. The poem is beautiful, the rhyming is superb and the feelings are expressed in totality.

I especially liked....

"She's the light of stars when the sun is leaving,
The work of God I would die believing."

Great pace and the poem flows on with much spontaneity. My compliments Abdul!

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you for reading and liking this poem :)

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome Abdul.

[Baban.A.A]

well....I angle it in my way. I must say I really do like it. the comparisons and analogues between her and the precious thing or soulless objects around was outstanding. esp "she is the sigh of joy when life is crying" very emotional and meaningful. I really like it and well done.

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you for the review!

[Baban.A.A]

most welcomed!

[Rita L. Sev]

This is beautiful, Abdul! More than romance, this touches the heart. Thank you for this smile!

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you very much :)

[breanna felt]

Why can't all men express their feelings this way??? I would love to have someone write something so special like this piece for me. Please keep writing, WE NEED PEOPLE LIKE YOU IN THIS WORLD.

[Abdul Aziz]

Haha, I'm sure it isn't that good. But thank you very much for the kind words :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very beautifully written and expressed poem. It's very musical and so gentle with a hint of magic about it. The last line left me absolutely speechless. Bravo!

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you Mr. Zavlanov!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

You're welcome, and it was my pleasure.

[lovergirl]

this poem says a lot about you and love , and if this "she" does exist then she is really lucky , good job i loved this poem

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you for reading and for the kind words :)

[An owl on the moon]

I honestly think love poetry is the most beautiful form of poetic expression... so keep it up please! One person can bring us alive in ways nothing else on Earth can, and you've deeply confessed that here in tenderness and wonder.

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you for affirming my belief!