Late night poetry

Deepness is real

Late night poetry
(Or writings)

Death
Seems to be okay
Something as normal
Right?
A common misconception
Between heaven and hell
If you do this you go there
It's true
Why don't people see that
Choosing a path
Of eternal torture
For something proclaimed as right
We see light as a sign of a new life
But yet we wonder
There is no "light"
In a place with pain
For people
Depression seems like hell
And we confuse them
"I'm living in hell"
They have no idea the torture
The pain in which they will seek
Because of their actions
But we still do it
Lust comes in
Not just for sexual
Drinking, drugs
Sure it's a "fun time"
Maybe 2 hours, 4
It's over and we crave more
We have the ability to change
But yet they simply don't
Afraid much? Maybe
Maybe confused
Lost
Simply because
They see life as an adventure
Sure it is
For some though
That "adventure"
The adrenaline courses
But when it's done
You only seek one thing
More
Until your body aches
Your muscles tense
When you lie on your death bed
What do you see
No light
Crazy

Reviews

[anne]

I really liked the feeling this poem gave me. Your style of writing really fits the overall theme. I really love that. Especially the end of this piece really spoke to me.
"What do you see
No light
Crazy"
That is so powerful and truthful but quite painful as well. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe like all things. When death is near. Most of us run from it.
"When you lie on your death bed
What do you see
No light
Crazy"
Hard to say. Light or darkness. Death is the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote