Deep

Be happy, while everyone else is not.

Deep

By Abby Vandeberg

Smile

Just for this one time

Smile

While everyone drowns in your sorrow

Bury them beneath the valley

Be the ocean

While they are the bottom

Be the one only

Show true fear hidden beyond the imaginable 

Smile because no one else can see

Tears behind a lovely face

As that tear rolls down your face

Show me what it means to be alive

While everyone else struggles to breathe 

Struggle and surrender 

As the ground shakes before you 

Every single piece of you

Shakes with it

Gosh just smile

For be that smile

That everyone aches for

Reviews

[Robert Parlange]

Very visual. Poetry is emotion displayed. You have a knack for that.

Keep writing.

[SariahM]

Your writing is pure wonder! I wish to see more from you my friend! well writ, and with pure awe, i leave you,

---Sariah---