Slipping through my fingers

Slipping through my fingers

A Poem by Abby L.
"

time keeps on slippin', slippin'...

"

Time is like rain


No not rain


Snow


Our moments falling all around us


Each so unique and different


When you reach out your hand to grasp it


You’re only left with the cold


Wet afterthought


And as time slips through our fingers


We realize we can do nothing to stop its falling


But sit and admire its beauty

© 2018 Abby L.


Author's Note

Abby L.
Inspired by the monologue at the end of the series "Haunting of Hill House"

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Very nice philosophical work here. I have never seen snowflakes used as a metaphor for passing time. The last three lines offer an upbeat view of how to deal with it, something few of us have mastered. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Abby L.

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on October 28, 2018
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Tags: time, sad, weather, earth, nature

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Abby L.
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Hello! I'm Abby! I write various things, but my main content is poetry. I'm from Alabama, USA. I'm involved in various hobbies, but I have a strong passion for music and most of the arts. I'm not ver.. more..

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