The Green Grass Meadow

The Green Grass Meadow

A Poem by Abby L.
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There was a green grass meadow 

isolated and alone 

The remains of laughter 

That many had known


This green grass meadow was not very different

from the green grass pasture 

that wasn’t very distant


But something about this meadow made many 

feel comfort and security


Could it be the long soft greens?

Could it be the dancing flowers?

No matter what you were insured many hours

of peace and hope and restoration 

of the lost inside the nation


This green grass meadow was a very mystic place

with tress all around in ever displace

But there was something lurking there

if you turned around surely you’d stare


The thing that inhabited the green grass meadow 

was non-other than the cause of its growing low

What could’ve been done? 

The thing cannot be beat

It has long nails and basks in everyones defeat


“Its just too much!

Just give up!” they would say

There echoes of laughter long faded away


Had they forgotten the joy that was shared?

The peace that was given?

Have they forgotten how much despair?

“The despair reeked us into turmoil!” I said

“Should we go back to the days of horror and let it uncoil?”

They grew silence

I had won

Only my journey had just now begun


The meadow so lonely was there now discrete

The thing lay in a heap

It had only wanted to observe the joy 

and watch the love, was that too much for this thing?

It had broiled in melancholy

stuck in defeat

When a little boy stumbled out before its feet

The little boy looked at it in disbelief

Then a big silly grin spread from cheek to cheek


“You like this place too?” He asked

“Aren’t you amazed at the wonders it proves?”

The thing could not reply he was in shock

for a little friend given him a chance to talk


The thing opened its mouth, sharp teeth showing

then let out a wail, gawking

The wail rose up in it’s throat and it’s sadness unleashed

causing his emotions to go on a feast


The little boy patted it’s back in support

and it realized this was it’s last resort

The thing cried and cried until it had no more tears

It had not cried for years


The little boy was still there patting his side

When I walked in filled with pride

I was ready to defeat the beast that taken away our pleasure

Even though it had to come to this measure


They needed the peace, it was in demand

So I need to step up and take it in hand


With my sword and my shield I stood before them

Ready for the mayhem I was bestowing them

I ran forward to the thing and plunged my sword blindly

Only to realize the agony

The little boy had jumped out in front of the thing

I could not be sure of what I had just slain


The boy went white

His eyes were cold

But he looked back into the thing

A grin engraved on his long gone face


I did not want this.

It was not the plan

I never thought of the stakes at hand


The thing stricken with grief over its first friend

Ran back into the shadows where it first began


“Is this how it is?” I asked them

“Is how it works out?” 

The murder of a innocent boy, by me, without a doubt?

Who was the monster? 

Who was the problem?


Was it them, who needed comfort?

Was it them who got involved?

Was it innocence that took action?

Was it the thing that thought selfishly?


Who was the selfish, horrible being that wished this upon us?


Was it the green grass meadow?

Isolated and alone

The remains of laughter

That many had known?

© 2015 Abby L.


Author's Note

Abby L.
This is long, but I think its good. Sorry if some things are capitalized, Its very late and I'm worn out. I really hope you enjoy it, and kind of think about the meaning of it. I'm open to all criticism, and I look forward to reviews!!

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There is a good flow to this poem. It is not only an easy, enjoyable read, but also a compelling and impressive work over-all. Well done you!


Posted 9 Years Ago


Abby L.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it when someone reviews my work so it means a lot to me!
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It is no doubt a good poem but lack of poetical and symbolic expression.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abby L.

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your opinion and your review! While writing this, I was going for a symbolic poem showi.. read more

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Hello! I'm Abby! I write various things, but my main content is poetry. I'm from Alabama, USA. I'm involved in various hobbies, but I have a strong passion for music and most of the arts. I'm not ver.. more..

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