I'm Just Me

I'm Just Me

A Poem by Abby Gill

 

I'm Just Me

I sit alone

In a dark corner

Asking myself

"Why is everybody staring at me?"

Their stares are like a knife to my heart

I just want to tell them sometimes

"Please stop staring at me,

I'm just a normal person

Like everybody else."

Sometimes at night

I just pray to God

"Why me God, what have I done

To deserve this?"

But then I go to school the next day

And hang out with all my friends

And it makes me realize

That I am a normal person after all

© 2009 Abby Gill


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This is a very interesting, and thought provoking piece. Learning who you are, and becoming solid in your own sense of self worth will bring you out of the corner, and will lessen your need for validation from your friends. Very well written. I enjoyed this very much, and it brought up some old memories for me...some I'd rather forget.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes,you are a normal person after all.
Sometimes,it may appear that others are staring at us.
It is just a wrong idea or thought.
Everybody keeps busy with her/his own business.
It is the best option to give no heed to such thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago



Do you choose the dark ?

Have you been cornered by someone ?

Actually, those questions are probably none of the reviewer`s
business. We should stimulate you to consider all the reasons
for your discomfort.

You have a nice, smooth style of writing. You prompt us to
question, not only your thinking, but our own.

Excellent writing ! Keep at it , please.

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very interesting, and thought provoking piece. Learning who you are, and becoming solid in your own sense of self worth will bring you out of the corner, and will lessen your need for validation from your friends. Very well written. I enjoyed this very much, and it brought up some old memories for me...some I'd rather forget.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very interesting piece. I, like the staring people, are wondering why you are in that dark corner.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Abby Gill
Abby Gill

Circleville, OH



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