words to hearts be wed... on stones, carved in led!

words to hearts be wed... on stones, carved in led!

and as my words demolish

like castles, within the vague mists of time,

there is an ending, open...

to a story of mine,

and as i confirm;

my standing and ground

a fairly surprising gesture

comes out of sound

this story i told

comes so out of rhyme;

so out vogue and fashion...

yet cursed and fine

...

do i walk away? or as has she i?

else, is it i who wanders

where hath our goodbye?!

not passed i have,

away from you,

but do i recall

a feeling due...

and like every memory and every prose,

i have tried to give thee, that which you chose...

but haven't nor shall i will...

to let you go...

nor let you still...

be cause my woe

and embark my hill

until your path is revealed

before your sight,

and all this apathy is rid of

along thoughts made right...

then be-willingly, i shall give back

what was then within your reach

yours its still, but kept in stack!

either way i yearn,

for your voice this night

like i have before,

i wrote this kite...

for i fear what i fear

this be-worthless fight

and my love tossed away

like yesternight 

i am always there,

for yer eyes to see...

how glorious it was,

and what it has made of me!

but still i am... i was... and i will be...

ever in debt... and in loyalty!

i have made you a promise,

and that i shall keep...

lest you may change yer feelings

and set your mind to sleep...

my heart i shall obey and shalt not be gone...

ever shall i irk your space...

and ever shall be long!

By:

The Black Iris Of The Luminous Imperious

Reviews

[Walk away slow poet]

WOW, such a powerful write of the heart. I feel the tugging.
This is a really wonderful write, deep and sad. Awesome write

[Satchmo's Gal]

do i walk away? or as has she i

This line kind of confused me. Other than that the flow was excellent. really good work.

[Ruth]

Wow!
A beautiful poem love!
This is truly awesome work!
Your vividness in description and metaphor is outstanding!
xx

[Robert]

wow you really blew me away here, its very deep and rythmic. my friend i think we have found what i was looking for. you structure is amazing with your normal amazing word choice is exactly what i knew would be perfect for you. your phraseing here also was very interesting almost shakesperian in its flow. really good job

Robert

[TamerQtaish]

Not in the mood i am into at the moment, but f**k that's some good s**t!!!
Actually you are one of the few people I know that keeps improving in writing on a steady rate...
Amazing piece bro
All the best,
Tamer

[M.Kilani]

let yer heart lead ye in the journey of thy love
for hearts to be one I ask blessing from above
may yer lonesome path come to an end
may ye find piece along the way my friend
may comfort find a way to the drifter inside
upon those stones comfort may ye find