The Uncovering!

a 45 minute write, typos i suspect are all over! grammar sucks! and punctuation... hopeless! just tell me what you think!

The Uncovering!

 

the pain and the rush...
of too many a stone!
the flame and the crush...
of a dream forlorn!
the tears that never end...
and branches that never bend!
that shade me with my misery, and past!
cover me with darkness, and the love they cast...
over late beloved and chums!
as the clouds go by so fast...
a resting place so far away...
most needed to lay by today!
i wish i was close!
but, what can i say?
do heavens lend notions for our cries?
do gods learn to appreciate goodbyes?
do angels up above, hear your sighs?

i've cried out "god give me answers"
release me from all these lies!

he just walks away enjoying his heavenly music...
and rains once more upon my withering garden of tombstones and ghosts...
ancients trees and orchids of venomous memories...
he walks away, and leaves me drowning in my death!
in my tears, in his mockery of fate...
and wavering with my final breath!
only holding my hands, are the shatters of my wolf...
and my last standing angel!
she became my reason to survive through this life...
i've been on heaven's doorsteps, with the door open...
halfway inside...
seen the devil
on the all-mighty's side!
angels crying in vain...
pleading to all-mighty's pride!
and the wind blew...
as it pushed my article a-strew...
the thorns in my garden...
the daggers and knives i went through!
moments the ground...
overcome with fear!

the pain i see through the tear spots i see on the dirt...
and the memory of a betrayed Messiah stands so clear...
now that i can feel the pain again...
the numbness is relatively gone, but with it...
comes the wrath...
of missing you!
and how i wish i can hold you closely...
just to hear you breath again....
i want to play with your hair once more...
as i hear you call my name!
and you my brother... how i wish you can hold my hand...
and push me down the lane....
just show me whats left of truth...
and how the world is not the same!

darkness comes a visitor...
to cover me with the suffering!
the shivering will be no more...
as the demons upon me suppering!

as the ashes of the lost...
have always been in the air!
the spirits from which they'll be born again...
will always be there...

but the tears...
will never dry!
and we shall never...
learn to say goodbye
yes... the tears...
they shall never dry!

 

By: The Black Iris, Of The Luminous Imperious

Author's Note

inspired by:
"Angel with Butterfly"
A Poem by ~crazy Beautiful~

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Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

What an inspiration ,, this poem touches me deeply.. so many questions. Answers? I have none either.. i like the way this reads The title is very fitting.. much uncovered and much left to be uncovered.
I too feel the feelings you so well have written .. a sad yet beautiful poem .
I found little i would change, well written.

Chloe
xoxo

[Burr the Story Sorceres..]

This is a truely great poem. It seems your poems are the only ones that make me actually cry, which is a good thing. This one has a fornlorn, depressed feeling that comes with losing loved ones.
I really, truely love this poem!!
:'-)