Beyond The Rusty Gates Of Will!

Beyond The Rusty Gates Of Will!

A Poem by A.r. Bazian
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A Poem by: The Black Iris, Of The Luminous Imperious Ft. The Lord Belial - The Fellowship Of Belial

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Beyond The Rusty Gates Of Will!

 

Far beyond, and within the trees so high...

stood a man...

crumbling...

in an ancient eternal cry!

 

amongst the ghostly mist of dawn...

the shining beam... of a dust forlorm...

crushed the greates of all man...

'tis the draining corpse...

of my sinful storm...

when wisdom... by agony fell...

and by the devine of command was torn!

 

there at the old steps of thy door!

i stood with the silence...

the winds of blasphomy grew wild and sore...

it dansed and swayed...

upon the crackled marble floor...

 

oh, what a broken tone...

of such crimson violence...

as i recall the mighty pain...i...

asunder and call thy sacred name!

you hid... there behind the veils of shame...

a black flame arised...

through agnostic dusk was laid...

thats in me... beyond the dark shades it stayed...

was the only truthful pain...

with blood upon it astain...

one that any human can revel...

and all man is to blame...

slain lies such glory...

of mankind that reignes...

with velvet dreams... untouched by sin...

it drew the eyes of beloved grim...

the path of nomads...

and wanderers like him!

he stood there against thy door...

as many... have stood there before...

astral guidance led his yore...

with blooded ink upon the pages...

of his everlasting... infinite lore!

 

 

By:

The Black Iris, Of The Luminous Imperious
&
The Lord Belial - The Fellowship Of Belial

© 2008 A.r. Bazian


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Again your imagery and word choice are inspired.
The only thing i can say is that the continuous use of "..." can sometimes take away from the reader in the piece

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very well written and it plays nicely on the mind

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was an interesting piece to say the least, I liked the visuals and I'm not quite sure if I could say it would be one of my favorites it definitely is an interesting piece. Good Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW
Send my regards to Belial for a piece well write and drawn into life by your words

Your talking a lot about the within and at the same time talking about the bigger picture of things!
Loved it

this is bullet proof!

Love and respect,
Tamer

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A.r. Bazian
A.r. Bazian

Amman/Salt, Middle East, Jordan



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A Communist in the Making, and a Student of History and Life. Find me on Hellopoetry too: http://hellopoetry.com/abazian more..

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