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i want to go home!

there in your arms!

i want to go home!

away from all the harms!

i want to go home!

 

so far away...

but you were always there for me!

it feels empty and alone!

i can't believe it took me this while to see...

that you belong to me!

 

i write myself free from sorrow...

dont worry...

i will love you more tomorrow...

 

i take a look around...

i feel i can't hold on anymore to life...

i miss you so...

you're a part of me!

the wind cuts me open like a knife...

and it all shows!

 

i want to come home!

there where its safe!

i want to come home!

the place i've never been!

i want to go home!

 

i never knew i could feel so in love again!

i never knew i could still feel the pain!

i sing my soul back to bed...

all the tears that have been shed!

and it aches!

it moans!

oh, how it hurts...

as i close my eyes to see...

where i want to be!

i sing a while...

i wash my tears in style...

and i smile...

with that little fragment of hope...

that keeps me going for one more mile!

out in the distance...

with no place to hide...

i run...

i want to go home!

before it gets darker...

i want to go home!

just to see you...

i cant emagine...

what if you're gone!

i just want go home!

in your arms...before its too late!

away from my theatre of pain...

just for a while...

just for a smile!

still linger words from me...

words i can't let go!

 

expectations... and fears...

calculations... and tears...

 

i'm done!

its enough...

 

i just want to go home!

to the place i've never been...

where i'm safe...

and no longer alone!

the one place i've never been!

the one place i call home!

Reviews

[Tessa Le Rouge]

"i sing a while...
i wash my tears in style...
and i smile...
with that little fragment of hope...
that keeps me going for one more mile!"

I dont know why but these verses just stick out to me so much.
I think they are beautiful lines, adding to every other beautiful word in the poem.
good job.
I really like this one.

[justjenn_2u]

I could feel your pleading. Wanting to be in a safe haven, out of the darkness and filth. I believe she has the power to nurture you, and you already know she is waiting for you. I see a man who has endured much and he is tired. This poem shows that you have a sensitive side, you are a little more fragile than the tough exterior where you hide.

Nice write!

[Emily B]

This is a great song lyric!

[Ahmad Alhour]

For moments... my tears were going to run down my closed eyes...
Dude you are such a fucken nobel lover and the only one that i've seen in my entire life...
I love the simplicity in this poem...
And i love the presenting of the deep emotions that you have like you are talking to yourself while you are exhausted by travelling your journey on your curvy path of life...

Very very very nice dude...
Deep, Emotional and Simple...
Keep it up forever more...

[Sparrow]

How beautiful and passionate! Nothing feels better than that person's arms...

[Cece]

i can hear the music
in the background
as the lyrics go on

oh i desire to go home
i dont know why
maybe i feel it in song

pls keep me moved

[TamerQtaish]

I wont say many words!
just that, I want to go home too!!!!
You know what I mean exactly by that!

Anyway, you amaze me with your words of magic in ink...

Love and respect,
Tamer