Diaries Of An Immigrant Soul, Pt.9: The Familiar Stranger

[Diaries Of An Immigrant Soul, Pt.9: The Familiar Stranger]

 

there he stood...

in the silence...

the strange relative...

we call our heart!

there he stood...

in the darkness...

he, now stands apart!

tore and broken...

freezing in the cold...

as the breeze haunts him...

through every fold...

his heart longs no more...

for something to hold!

 

now that the fire is gone...

he sees a spark...

as a stranger walks in his door...

so deep and dark...

a strange wind blows up his core...

and a flame rised...

once again like before...

a scent so welcomed...

of the stranger he'll adore...

the flames grew stronger...

the pesant heart

has found his ore!

 

the wind then trembles...

it grows bitter and sore...

as the heart gets a letter...

that hurried him no more...

the familiar stranger needs love...

as she's lost her love before...

and now she loses faith...

the pain is driving her insane...

he calls her name as he runs the lane...

he can only run... a journey eternal as the sun...

she lies in pain... and he, shall never again...

he has lost his love once...

he's willing... never again!

 

their heartbeat is sending love...

for the whole world to see...

what fate yet to witness...

only the martyrs and the free...

the power of our love Amy...

And the life, you've given me!

 

Author's Note

after losing my first love... some1... only one... was able to see through me!
Annick, also known as Amy!
as i have made Natalie (may she rest in peace) an oath that i will never give up hope, when it comes to love and life... she (Amy) gave me another reason to be!
and now... she's ill, really ill! i will not explain more coz i dont have the right to! and honestly... i have made my mind...
i will not lose her!
she gave me life the moment she showed me the way back to love! her love saved me, and i can only hope mine could help! and at the moment, we are so far apart!

i admit: I LOVE HER!
i decided: WE SHALL FIGHT, AND SHE'LL BE WELL!

"i could/would die for you, as i would/could live!
you... are my Everything now"

Reviews

[Cece]

love hurts
i dont know why

[Ahmad Alhour]

I love it...
New visionary dimension in your life has disclosed...
You have some true, nobel emotions for a lady that called Amy...
That nice, your poem is literaly deep bro...
Some kindda your are telling the story of your life recently and how you met her...
As she made you to see the light as others failed to...

And sorry for the pain she is suffering from, but i guess true lovers aren't made to revel this life... dude...
And so with the people forlormed...

[Burr the Story Sorceres..]

It is beautiful and makes my heart ache.
I have never lost or came close to losing a loved one, as far as I can remember, but your words make it clear how much it must hurt. I prey everything turns out okay.

[TamerQtaish]

Beautiful once more, and deep down from your deepest sorrow into the light!
I remember the day we shared the same bottle talking about the same pain!
And I too was given life again as you know my brother, and take it for me, those angels don't come every day, so protect, serve and if thats what it takes, die to keep them safe!

Just another beautiful writing of a beautiful soul
Love and respect my brother,
Tamer Qtaish