A Doomsday To Come, On My Road To Utopia

A Doomsday To Come, On My Road To Utopia

 

have you ever felt... the darkened light...
as it touches your face?
the purity of life and the manipulation of death...
all within the tenderness of her embrace...
such warmth, but such treason...
all gain up to our disgrace!
such is this dead lie...
shall we all this day face
for 'tis us whom had brought such fear...
into this place!

such is this day...
that i have felt the light
saw it from beyond the horizon...
it seemed so bright... in such veils of transparency...
wandering the skies... in show of its might!
oh... what glorious black sight...
as i ponder upon the path of my own truth!

such warmth... as in thy agony...
all brought to be as we all shall see...
the truth of my apocalypse...
a doomsday brought to me...
die... as i lie... in the bitterness of betrayal...
and covered with death... all those... whom shall fail...
the price I'll pay... for walking my own trail...
the path of liberty...
i journey for utopia!

by: The Black Iris, Of The Luminous Imperious

 

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

You have walked in the life where a black cloud covers your very being. This black cloud actually touches you and inhabits your inner being. Her touch was pure but destined to fade. We brought all of these horrible emotions into this world by our actions. You have tasted the goodness in the bad. You seem to feel as if you have doomed yourself in the decisions you have made and you know that there will be many more there to join you. To know the badness of the world, you have had to seen the goodness. I think you let the badness overpower you. You have seen too much, the eyes can only take but so much in, and the heart can only bear so much. I enjoy your poetry. You have talent with words.

[TamerQtaish]

Now this one are the best from the latests for me, it has a strong structure, the lines fit each other, not that free style but none the less it runs freely within my brain cells till now :)

Great job bro,
I will copy this to read it a few times more if you don't mind?

Love and respect,
Tamer Qtaish