the Beating Inside

 

The Beating Inside

 

Empty screams

Hollow destination

Darkened with light

The sins of this creation

Such wings of sorrow

Soar toward damnation

The price for the choice…

And gist of realization

What has been paid…

What has been done…

Them… whom have stayed…

And those whom are gone!

Those who stood tall…

under the burning sun

they've chosen to face it…

as we're all under the gun!

 

Silence gives such comfort

Under a burden of lies

Truth served to us disfigured…

What some call Devil…

But rather in disguise!

 

Flames… devouring my soul…

Virtuous gasps… tearing up all…

My fragile dreams… hung up on that wall…

In that single moment of truth… I knew the wall would fall!

 

Many eyes stand watching…

Laughing as I go on…

These lines tell a different story…

Many a story… all but one…

The simple story of an angry son…

Cold… alone…

Wandering the night…

In search of dawn…

The journey has just begun…

Haunted by his past…

Comes now his moment of truth…

He runs no more…

As eyes are on him…

Running the path of a broken sun…

That will never cleanse his sin!

Author's Note

all reviews are welcomed... i need as much guidance as possible!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The devil is a master of lies and disguise. He has inspired multitudes to his wicked ways to fall in sin and damnation. Interesting...:).............

[justjenn_2u]

To open the mouth and try to let out a voice (even a small voice), nothing comes out, feels as if a demon is sucking the life out. Being created and watching the world fall apart right at our finger tips. Each day, the evil is accepted even more so. I feel it. We make a choice, which direction to go, thus we must live with the decision made. To stand and fight for something that feels right, are we fooled and then is it too late? One deep scar can set the stage for what is to come. (I get a wide array of feelings and interpretations from your poetry). Perhaps I dig a little too deep. Your word power amazes me.

[Tessa Le Rouge]

it is very deep.
i really like the line:
"In that single moment of truth� I knew the wall would fall!"
keep up the good work.

[Cynthia Barrick (CHING..]

Well an awesome poem very deep keep up the writing