One Sentence: I still Breath

I still wake every morning to find myself dangled in mine own breath; this that you have cast upon my living.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Should it be kind sir wake up instead of just wake. I could be wrong . I stopped because I like this deep thought...:)

[A.r. Bazian]

Its "Wake", but thank you for your suggestion.
the difference is, that waking up has to do with sleeping! wake has more with conciousness

[Sami Khalil]

K. I had to ask...You are welcome...:)

[Tate Morgan]

Our inner self always arguing with itself always debating the things we hold dear

[justjenn_2u]

One sentence that shows strength. I have utmost respect for strength and learn from these one sentence statements

[A.r. Bazian]

thank you~
really!
i appreciate it!