Lies

Lies, they shatter dreams
They don't care about my feelings
Lies do not have hearts,
so they do not care when others fall
Apart.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Jaeda]

I think this is an important (if not first) realization to anyone, and no matter how long you think about it, lies will always hurt you. Good poem.

[Butterflymom]

This is honest, raw, and very well done.

[ICE]

This was short and to the point. I loved it!
It flowed quite nicely.
Lies have a tendency to just destroy everything...

[Alyssa]

I like this, its very short and sweet.
Its very clear with what the message says.
I like the flow, very nice :)