"I would date her if she was white..."

"I would date her if she was white..."

A Poem by Alexis

Is that cute?
Do you find that attractive?

Why is it it that the absence of that curve is what will drive you crazy?
Oh but not just you. 
It is EVERYWHERE.
When will you realize the BIG is BEAUTIFUL baby?
My voluptuosity ,
My curves , 
Baby it ' s ALL me. 

How is it that you can "love" a person 
Without loving ALL of them?
" Well I ' d love you if... "
Ummm... NO ,
I doesn ' t work like that. 

You " love " ME , 
And ALL of ME , 
(Sugah there is A LOT to love)
Or you don ' t " love " ANY of me...
(And THAT is A LOT to miss out on)

(White Black Skinny Fat. It ' s all the same in this " love game ". I am still ME no matter WHAT I look like. So , why is it that YOU can ' t seem to understand that?)

© 2010 Alexis


Author's Note

Alexis
I was inspired by "She"... "She" has the TRUE "Tongue of a Goddess".

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I love it.It's so true.I caan just see you delivering that.There was so much power in this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very strong and truthful piece that pulls the eyes in and then makes it's point with clear bold strokes. Your words are rich in a wisdom that many have seem to forgotten. The whole picture is always what people should be involving themselves in, not just the shell. Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the messege itself was delivered nicely, powerful well written and expressed.
the stylizing at the end, captures a craftiness that makes this poem
speak loudly and boldly, you did a great job, keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh so sorry i forgot to rate

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice awareness poem..Reminds me a bit of Maya Angelou's poem I Am Woman i think it is titled.. very good poem and message

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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