You are home...

You are home...

A Poem by Andrea A. Wentz
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For all those who must leave their homes for long periods of time, but later return to waiting arms.

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A noise I hear

A door you close

A lock I turn

A door I open

A smile you show

A tear I cry

An embrace we share

A joy we feel

You are home

© 2008 Andrea A. Wentz


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Nothing like the feel of coming home, the smells and sounds of thankful sighs of home are brought out in this. Excellent write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Sweet teardrop poem...very, very warming.

Thanks for penning this one.

Daniel

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this .. i think of the men and women who are away fighting and come home... not just them though, all of us who have been away and longed for home ..nice one , Andrea.

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, that's nice and warm! Home: for me it will be when I hold my little boy again, and hang out at my brothers in Hells Canyon.
Nice poem full of the feeling of welcome.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like a warm blanket on a cold night.
Like a ray of sun in a sea of clouds.
Like the first rain to a parched desert.
Like a symphony in a silent world.
I think you have summed it up perfectly!
About one who longs to return!
GReat Poem! :)


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful. i think the concept of home is one of the most comforting ideas. How sad it must be to leave that comfort but what a heavenly day it must be the time you finally return. You sum it up so nicely here.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Just beautiful, to the point, no frills, just the love and joy at having them home, wonderful. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 8, 2008
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Andrea A. Wentz
Andrea A. Wentz

Phoenix, AZ



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