you are enough

you are enough

A Poem by Aatharva Banaitkar

Your voice is enough, 
to fill my mind with happiness
And it is enough
to fill my loneliness.

Your smile is enough, 
to make me feel that I am on the top of the world.
It is enough,
without uttering a word.

Your eyes are enough,
to make me fall,
because I am your teddy 
And you are my doll.
                              -Aatharva Banaitkar

© 2015 Aatharva Banaitkar


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...and this art is enough to get me smiling and think of my own "enough". .... thankx for provoking it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quite beautiful penning, thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"because I am your teddy
And you are my doll."

Became my favorite lines.. Cute it is..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ena friend in love ??? Poem is going so lovely and cute.. It is childish yet nice..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice work buddy! It sounds like a true love :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem, Aahtarva, thank you for sharing this love poem. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well penned!
sweet sentiment and warm feeling come from these words:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Aatharva Banaitkar
Aatharva Banaitkar

bhusawal, maharashtra, India



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