chapter 2

the godfather council, at capital city mura.

2

At the godfather’s council, mura.

“What do you think? What will be arikita’s next move; do you think he will try to invade us? Maybe he wants to rule over whole land and waters of jaki”-zuki said to his fellow godfathers.

“I don’t think arikita will play his next move because he is behind the knife of jaki, we only have to make sure that he does not get the knife”-ruki 

“but first of all the great heavenly kings will try to secure their monopoly and will try to ascend the throne and so we have to take care of the heavenly kings or else they will try to invade jaki all at once”-shuki 

“You are right then arikita will try to play his move if the 8 kings don’t agree and we cannot handle the arikita and 8 heavenly kings all at once”-taki 

“we all know that what arikita is capable of, he had mastered almost all noshikato arts and only his ru element is left to be mastered, he is the only man who stood in front of jikachi jimota”-luki   

 

“what I will suggest is that, everyone should now focus on arikita, he almost overpowered us in the in the war of maruchi, it was our fortune that jimota possessed more power than him and arikita was having difficulty in mastering the ru element, something must be wrong in his past that is why he could not conquer the ru element, and now we should get benefits from his low ability for possessing the ru power“-naki suggested

“from the former godfathers only shidoki is still living and now he is almost 432 years I don’t think that now he will be able to possess the shidoki element”-jyuki 

“you are right the mysterious lost element of shido which is very mysterious power, but I don’t think that arikita have mastered shido elements, but the old shidoki lives at rukato woods near kikaarichi kingdom (the great heavenly kingdom of east )“- myuki 

“But I think the prophecy must not be wrong, or else we have find someone to descend the throne of jaki, we have to train someone with all the 8 natural elements“-zuki

“But for that he must gain the blade of jaki the jikachi midochi and then he will be ready to ascend the throne”-ruki

“I think we must train zumo, he has the capability to ascend the throne “-shuki

“So one of us will go to rukato woods (the devil forest) to find shidoki is still able to possess the shido element”-taki

“And we also need to find the nokushi may be he can help”-luki

“We now have 15 years left after then we need someone to ascend the throne, or else another war should be fought, the 8 heavenly kings are gaining power day by day“-naki

“I think we should not waste time and first we should do something about tokajis”- jyuki   

  

“They are the tribe of rukato woods they are almost mysterious but what if they can help us”-myuki

“But it’s now time to leave, till the next council we will distribute our task to find the shidoki, zumo, nokushi.-zuki

 

 

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I have the same commentary as Shubham Joshi. It's getting a bit better than the previous chapter, but the names you're using are too many and too strange to memorize. Just keep writing, you only get experience through practice. :) Rudi

[Shubham Joshi]

Well the story you are putting up here is quite intriguing because I just love fantasy but you will have to improve with the language, it's already better than the previous chapter. And the other thing is so much of these weird names, all alike they are just extremely hard to memorise but that could be dealt with later, for now I am enjoying your tale and just anxiously waiting for the next chapter.