Melody Of My Heart

the tune from my heart

what melody does a heart play?

i think most of us don't know,

every one thinks what is special about it?

but its just like my soul is the piano player

and my heart is a panio

when my soul is happy

the melody then is sweet

when my soul is sad 

the melody is slow 

and the beats become low

when i am afraid

then the song becomes fast

and at last after many years

the piano stops

the curtains are drawn

then the show is over

 but after sometime 

a new piano is born

but the player remains the same

and is ready to play another tune 

Author's Note

which melody do your heart play?

Reviews

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

A very nice concept explained really well. A sweet poem expressing life's realities in a beautiful way. :)

what melody do a heart play?
The question is genuine and intriguing. However, it should be melody ''does'' and not ''do''.

but it just like my soul is the piano player
This is also a good line but it should be but ''it's'' just like and not but ''it'' ....... The line, however, is really creative.

the piano stops
the curtains are down
then the show is over
but after sometime
a new piano is born
but the player remains the same
and is ready to play another tune

I really liked this part. Beautifully written. Just one thing ''curtains are ''down'' is not correct. It should be curtains are closed or curtains are drawn.
Apart from these it's a great read. Thumbs up! :)

[Aatharva Banaitkar]

thank you for your kind remarks and again thanks for correcting me

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

You're welcome! :)

[Perkele.7885]

my heart mostly plays slow/beat rhythm and blues or perhaps group harmonies. My tunes are constant and I hardly ever turn on the car radio because I am already singing the tunes that I want to hear.
a nice poem AATHARVA

[nazia]

We actually do not know hat melody our hearts play. and you made me think about that, thank you.
A wonderful and original piece of work. Intriguing and at the same time beautiful :)

[B]

I love it

Its romantic and very dreamy

[Confuser]

Aatharva: As to your question, I believe you are correct: most people do not know. The soul touches the heart, they work in unison in our every changing world filled with sadness, heartache, elation. I loved the way your emotions changed with the melody; I believe every melody is unique to each person and is every changing, evolving. The theme is beautiful, so interesting. Lovely! Thank you so very much. Dale

[Kousika]

A well expressive poem.. Made me feel I am the player who is sitting with a piano..
itz simple, cute and great..
I just loved it..:))
Great my friend..

[Jamestown]

Very well written piece, thought provoking and great life message!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!