the very cake lake

the very cake lake

A Chapter by Aatharva Banaitkar
"

it is o's birthday

"
the candles of island blow
at the lake i could see
that all sat like candles around the cake
middle of that lake
at a rocky island
small as chair
a man sat there 
as the cherry
tige was with me till here 
we visited the man
all we could hear was sound
of breathing from the edge of the lake
those were cake's candle were breathing
but cherry didn't 
still alive
because he was breathing slow
 with the flow
thats why we couldn't hear it
and thats was my birthday treat
-aatharva banaitkar


© 2015 Aatharva Banaitkar


Author's Note

Aatharva Banaitkar
could you find the secret hidden in the poem
if you, please reply

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