at cup-cup town

cup cup knowing

at cup-cup town

 

after tige and i started our jouney 

when just visiting the world biggest cup

to downwards of the road

a man was calling me

i and tige come to him

he said only look and see

he uncovered the a golden cup

he looked at me and smile

i thought that it was his style

then he said fill the cup from the jug

i filled it 

and then he unfilled it

all looked at me

and tige also smiled 

then i filled it 

and then he unfilled it

then i got what was happening 

and i burst out laughing

knowing what i was filling in the cup

and thats all with the cup-cup town

-aatharva banaitkar

Author's Note

usually my poem don't contain much rhyme because i don't need some, feelings are enough to express to people through writing what i meant,a question do you know what was there in the jar ? if you could then please reply

Reviews

[jeannemarie coulter]

i like the idea of our cups never running over...keeping them partially empty to keep our minds seeking...the mind is our cup and it is never full so we constantly seek more knowledge and continue to grow...

[Aatharva Banaitkar]

your answer is partially right that all this is about knowledge, but there is also something beyond knowledge, it's just the thing which makes us human to go beyond human, when he fill the cup the first time there was nectar in the cup as soon he see the nectar that nectar transformed into poison and so he unfill the cup.