i used to cry cause of you

      

 I used to cry

 

Because  of you!!!!                                      

Day and night

I would think about you and cry 

Because you hurt me so bad  

You hurt me just because

I wouldn't have sex with you

You were so stupid for doing that

I was smart 

Because I made the right decision .

Aaron I think this would make a great poem... Your words are heartfelt. Continue being who you are and waiting. You made the right decision.

Reviews

[aaron]

thanks art

[Arthur Henn]

Beautiful words of the soul. Keep writing, and keep making the right decions... You will be fine.

Art

[aaron]

thanx

[~eVelyN fAiTh~]

I really like this poem, because it expresses the harsh reality on the pressure put on people who are trying to wait before engaging in sexual relations. Its beautiful in a truthfull way

[aaron]

thanx

[Steve]

yes yes you did. You sound very wise. i like the emotion of this write.

[aaron]

i know

[Julie]

Your welcome! hey I wasnt trying to be rude or anything I just think you can do better.!

[aaron]

thankx you guys thanks julie

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesom and i love it and you did a really awesom job on it