Alright, so, 'Lission' should be 'Listen'.
'Beaconing' should be 'Beckoning'.
'Fallow' should be 'Follow.'
'Muss' should be 'Must'.
Ok, now I will guess at what the story behind this is...
An addiction of some kind, I think. Cigarettes, or.. alcohol, or something.
Am I right? d:
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
the addiction is lust, and the madness of trying to face it head on only to fail. so all that is lef.. read morethe addiction is lust, and the madness of trying to face it head on only to fail. so all that is left is to run.
Alright, so, 'Lission' should be 'Listen'.
'Beaconing' should be 'Beckoning'.
'Fallow' should be 'Follow.'
'Muss' should be 'Must'.
Ok, now I will guess at what the story behind this is...
An addiction of some kind, I think. Cigarettes, or.. alcohol, or something.
Am I right? d:
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
the addiction is lust, and the madness of trying to face it head on only to fail. so all that is lef.. read morethe addiction is lust, and the madness of trying to face it head on only to fail. so all that is left is to run.
Hey all! My name is Aaron G. I just got back to this sight and edited all my poems. Mostly grammar and flow. However I’m glad to be back, and hopefully while I’m at work I can come up with.. more..