Nothing

My first true poem in a year. Filed with my solemn pain and love for one who cannot see past me, and therefore cannot in brace me.

How can I find the words?

To best describe my wounds.

 

How can I find the way?

To best show you my cures.

 

How can I do this?

How can I try?

 

I fined only whimpers,

Uttered in confusion and strife.

 

I fined only madness,

Blasting within my mind.

 

I have no words!

No fragments of sanity!

 

I only have emotion.

Raw and uncontrolled.

 

This loneliness,

And biter pain.

 

This ice on my heart.

 

I ache for your touch.

Your lips once more touching my own.

 

But I feel nothing.

 Not even a cold stone.

 

You leave me with nothing!

NOTHING!

 

…nothing at all…

 

Author's Note

did edit in word. hope its good.

Reviews

[MeGoRawrr]

So much raw emotion!

I wonder what the inspiration was behind this..

[aaron]

Sorry for the 5 year delay on the respond. I just came back again to this sight. The idea was simple. When all you have is a tombstone then do you have anything at all?

[wordman]

I could feel the pain in this write,great job

[aaron]

thanks for the review. and im glad you could feel the emotion of it.

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

Penned with pain and sadness. You feel with the narrator. Excellent...:).....

[aaron]

thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......